Question

假設(shè)你是某國(guó)際學(xué)校廣播站成員，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英文擬寫一份關(guān)于預(yù)防H7N9流感的通知。
1. 勤洗手；
2. 一旦感冒，馬上就醫(yī)；
3. 病的較重的同學(xué)，建議在家休息直到醫(yī)生說(shuō)可以回校；
4. 你的一、兩個(gè)建議。
【寫作要求】
1. 文章的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出不計(jì)入詞數(shù)；
2. 文章需包含要點(diǎn)的所有內(nèi)容，字?jǐn)?shù)120詞左右。
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)精準(zhǔn)、信息內(nèi)容完整、篇章結(jié)構(gòu)整潔。
Announcement
Hello everyone. Here are some recommendations for keeping yourself healthy during H7N9 outbreak.
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May everybody be healthy and enjoy your study. That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

Announcement
Hello everyone. Here is some recommendations for keeping yourself healthy during H7N9 outbreak.The most basic thing you should do is wash your hands frequently so as to reduce the chance to get infected. If any of you have caught a cold, you should go and see a doctor as soon as possible. For those with serious illness, we suggest you stay at home and rest until the doctor tells you it’s safe to return to school. Then you’d better clean the surface of your desks and chairs at least daily. Do remember to open the doors and windows to let in enough fresh air even on cold winter days. Also, fruit and vegetables, as well as sports will surely do you good.
May everybody be healthy and enjoy your study. That’s all. Thank you.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，所給要點(diǎn)清晰，要求明確，話題內(nèi)容貼近社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，勾勒要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文中要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的變化及主謂一致問(wèn)題。同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文能夠根據(jù)寫作提示，較好地把與寫作相關(guān)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行歸納整合，內(nèi)容覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，考生有較大的發(fā)揮空間；同時(shí)靈活使用復(fù)雜句式，使文章自然流暢。文章中還使用了一些常用的句式和短語(yǔ)，這為文章增色不少。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意加強(qiáng)練筆，掌握一些常用句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。