Question

過(guò)去人們使用信件和公用電話交流，但現(xiàn)在人們更多的使用手機(jī)和因特網(wǎng)；過(guò)去人們出行多步行或騎自行車(chē)，但現(xiàn)在人們更多的是坐汽車(chē)、高鐵甚至是飛機(jī)等。請(qǐng)你就以上內(nèi)容選一個(gè)話題寫(xiě)一篇短文談?wù)勛兓�，并舉例說(shuō)說(shuō)變化帶來(lái)的好處。
要求：1）內(nèi)容完整，書(shū)寫(xiě)整齊。
2）詞數(shù)：80-100。

Answer 1

People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones. But nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead. This change in communication has good effects on our life and work. Compared with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient. If you miss your grandmother, you just make out your phone and say “hello” to her. If you want to place an order with a foreign company, you can e-mail the message. It’ll be a matter of minutes before you get their reply. Aren’t we living in a good time!

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第二人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文多次使用了帶有條件狀語(yǔ)從句的主從復(fù)合句，為文章增色不少。如：If you miss your grandmother, you just make out your phone and say “hello” to her. If you want to place an order with a foreign company, you can e-mail the message.