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4．學(xué)校志愿者協(xié)會(huì)招募新成員，打算在暑假期間組織志愿者活動(dòng)．假設(shè)你是Li Hua，請(qǐng)你寫一篇60詞左右的短文給志愿者協(xié)會(huì)，報(bào)名參加此次活動(dòng)．內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：你自己的簡(jiǎn)要介紹；你要去哪個(gè)地方做志愿者？你能做什么事情？你對(duì)志愿者工作有什么感受或體會(huì)？請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名．
提示詞：Li Hua，student，Class Four，Grade Three，the Old People's Home，sing，dance．
My name is LiHua，I am a student in ClassFour，GradeThree．Can I go to the Old People's Home to be a volunteer？I like helping old people because they need more help than others．Besides，I can learn a lot from them．My hobbies are singing and dancing．So I will sing some old songs for the old people to cheer them up．I can also clean windows for them to make their rooms bright．When I see they are happy，I feel happy，too．I think that being a volunteer is great．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  I like helping old people because they need more help than others．我喜歡幫助老人，因?yàn)樗麄儽葎e人需要更多的幫助．這是because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，因?yàn)椤��?br /> 高分句型二
 I think that being a volunteer is great我認(rèn)為做志愿者是偉大的．這是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，I  think 是主句，后面的是賓語(yǔ)從句，being a volunteer 是動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)．

解答 My name is LiHua，I am a student in Class Four，Grade Three【要點(diǎn)一，自己的簡(jiǎn)要介紹】．Can I go to the  Old People's Home to be a volunteer？【要點(diǎn)二，要去哪個(gè)地方做志愿者】I like helping old people because they need more help than others【高分句型一，注意狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】．Besides，I can learn a lot from them．My hobbies are singing and dancing．So I will sing some old songs for the old people to cheer them up．I can also clean windows for them to make their rooms bright【要點(diǎn)三，能做什么事情】．When I see they are happy，I feel happy，too．I think that being a volunteer is great【高分句型二，注意賓語(yǔ)從句的使用】．【要點(diǎn)四，對(duì)志愿者工作有什么感受或體會(huì)】

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