Question

9．在我們身邊，總有很多需要幫助的人．創(chuàng)建文明城市，也需要每個人都積極擔(dān)任志愿者工作．請你以"Volunteer Day"為題，用英語寫一篇不少于80詞的短文．
內(nèi)容要求：1．你喜歡從事什么樣的志愿者工作，為什么？
2．描述一件你或他人在"志愿者日"的感人經(jīng)歷；
3．這件經(jīng)歷對你的教育或未來的積極影響．
注    意：短文中不允許出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實姓名和校名等信息．
Volunteer Day
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 Being a volunteer is very great．做志愿者是非常偉大的． Being a volunteer 是動名詞做主語．
高分句型二
It is a great experience for her because she loves kids這是一個偉大的經(jīng)歷，因為她愛孩子．這是because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，因為…．

解答 Volunteer Day
Being a volunteer is very great【高分句型一，注意動名詞的使用】．I want to be a volunteer to protect the environment．Because the earth is our home．The pollution is becoming serious．【要點一，你喜歡從事什么樣的志愿者工作，為什么】
Xiao Hong volunteers at an elementary school，he  helps elementary students read．It is a great experience for her because she loves kids【高分句型二，注意狀語從句的使用】，and not only the kids are learning from her，she learnt a great deal from the kids as well．Xiao Ming takes care animals in Animal Hospital．It is great because Xiao Ming wants to become a vet．Xiao Gang volunteers at a hospital，he sings some songs to cheer the patients up．Xiao Gang feels really satisfied   because the patients are all happy．【要點二，描述他人在"志愿者日"的經(jīng)歷及影響】

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