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【題目】書面表達(dá)

泰山是我國(guó)著名的旅游勝地，每年有大量的游客來(lái)此游玩。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中游客以前和現(xiàn)在行為的變化，以“Behave well during the travel”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?/span>

以前	現(xiàn)在
亂扔雜物，隨地吐痰	廢物入箱，愛惜環(huán)境
摘花毀樹，傷害動(dòng)物	愛護(hù)植物，關(guān)愛動(dòng)物
隨處抽煙，亂涂亂畫	自覺禁煙，保護(hù)名勝
你的感受：作為中學(xué)生，我們……（至少3點(diǎn)）

注意：1.短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使文章連貫;

2.詞數(shù)100左右,短文開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

3.文中不得提及考生所在的學(xué)校及自己的姓名;

4.參考詞匯:行為、舉止：behave;吐痰：spit

Behave well during the travel

Mountain Tai is a famous tourist attraction . Every year many tourists come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery. But a few years ago,________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Behave well during the travel

Mountain Tai is a famous tourist attraction. Every year many tourists come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery. But a few years ago, a lot of bad behaviors happened quite often during the travel. Some threw litters, painted on the walls, and spit on the ground everywhere. Some picked flowers, destroyed trees and hurt animals. And even worse, some smoked in the woods. How dangerous!

Luckily, things have changed now. Rubbish is always put into dustbins. People are friendly to animals. Nobody smokes around the woods and places of interest are well kept. All these changes make us happy.

As a student, I think we should know it’s our duty to protect the environment. In order to make Huaguo Mountain and our city more beautiful, let’s behave well and try our best to help fight (against) bad behaviors…

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。在寫作前首先要仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。其次要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫。

再次根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：該文語(yǔ)句流暢，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)了題目中的每個(gè)要點(diǎn)。還多次使用了連接詞and，固定短語(yǔ)如a few，a lot of，quite often，In order to，try one’s best等等都為文章增色不少。