Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是Hua Long, 你想介紹你的好朋友Lucy給你的的一位英國(guó)筆友Tom。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示，給他寫一封信。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。

要求：(1)要點(diǎn)完整，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)正確。(2)省略號(hào)部分適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（3）字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右。

1.Lucy, 13歲，陽光中學(xué)七年級(jí)一班, 戴著眼鏡，個(gè)子不高........

2.她擅長(zhǎng)英語，對(duì)畫畫很感興趣，沒有很多時(shí)間玩電腦游戲。

3.經(jīng)常做運(yùn)動(dòng)，很少吃漢堡和喝可樂。

4.她家附近有一個(gè)購物中心，她經(jīng)常周末在那里購物。

5.她過得很開心，她希望.........

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to tell you about my good friend ,Lucy._____________________________

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All the best,

Hua Long

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to tell you about my good friend, Lucy. She is 13 years old. She studies in Class1, Grade7 at Sunshine Middle School. She always wears glasses and isn’t tall. She is helpful and kind.

She ia good at English, and she’s interested in drawing .She has no time to play computer games.

She often does sports .She seldom has hamburgers or cola, because they are bad for health. There’s a shopping mall near her home, so she often shops there on weekends.

She always has a good time. She hopes to be a teacher when she grows up.

All the best,

Hua Long

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭和結(jié)尾。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文多次使用連接詞and、so，以及固定句型，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。