Question

【題目】你叫肖宏, 是一名中學(xué)生。你的美國朋友John想了解你在中國的家庭生活, 請你寫一篇短文介紹自己的家庭生活。內(nèi)容提示: 1）簡要介紹家庭成員。2）說說你有什么個(gè)人財(cái)產(chǎn)或物品。3）你是否做家務(wù)。4）你和家人一起的活動(dòng)。5）是否有家規(guī), 是什么？6）關(guān)于你的家庭, 你最喜歡的是什么？
注意: 1）條理清晰, 意思連貫, 語句通順, 標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確, 邏輯嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)； 2）80詞左右；可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展。
提示詞: 個(gè)人財(cái)產(chǎn)possession
Dear John,
I'm glad to tell you my family life in China
I hope you can come here to experience my life with me.
Yours sincerely,
Xiao Hong

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

I'm glad to tell you my family life in China. There are four people in my family. My father is a manager at a hotel. Mrs Wang is my mother and she is a nurse at a hospital. My sister is 7. I love my family members.

I like collecting stamps so I have many beautiful stamps. My parents work very hard. In my spare time, I often help my parents do housework. On weekends we often watch TV or go to see films together.

We have some family rules. We can't watch TV on weekdays, we can't go out to play alone in the evening and so on.

I like my family very much. Whenever I have trouble, it is always there.

I hope you can come here to experience my life with me.

Yours sincerely,

Xiao Hong

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文, 介紹個(gè)人家庭生活。本題給出的材料較為詳細(xì)。動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn), 然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配問題, 然后組織成文。注意敘述的條理性, 適當(dāng)使用連接詞。

寫作步驟：
一、閱讀提示，弄清所有信息，明確寫作要點(diǎn)。
1.介紹家庭成員。 There are……people in my family。My father is……
2.人財(cái)產(chǎn)或物品。 I have
3.是否做家務(wù)help my parents do housework
4.和家人一起的活動(dòng)On weekends we often
5.家規(guī),family rules
6.關(guān)于家庭, 最喜歡的是……I like my family very much
二、根據(jù)要點(diǎn)，寫出關(guān)鍵詞、短語或句子。
三、組詞成句。連句成篇。注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。