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【題目】書面表達(dá)

學(xué)校將在下周舉行英文演講比賽，Jack的話題是“對(duì)我影響最深的人”，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下材料，幫他組織一篇英文演講稿，介紹一下三位對(duì)他影響最深的人。

Persons	Jobs	Details
My father	A cook	1. 40多歲, 中等身材; 2. 充滿愛(ài)心(具體表現(xiàn)); 3. 令我驚訝的是, 他已經(jīng)決定去世后捐贈(zèng)遺體供醫(yī)學(xué)研究.
Tan Dun	A composer	1. 1958年出生在湖南省中部地區(qū), 從小對(duì)音樂(lè)很感興趣; 2. 把中西方音樂(lè)融合在一起; 3. ….. (發(fā)揮一點(diǎn))
Jackie Chan	A film star	1. 成龍, 已參演了近100部影片, 獲得了許多獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng); 2. 多年從事慈善工作(具體表現(xiàn)); 3. 被公認(rèn)為是一位超級(jí)明星, 受到人們高度贊揚(yáng).

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. My topic is “the persons who have influenced me most”. They are my father, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

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They are all my heroes. From now on, I will learn from them.

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【答案】

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. My topic is “the persons who have influenced me most”. They are my father, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

My father is a good cook. He is over forty years old. He is neither tall nor short. He is a person full of love. He often helps those people in need. To my surprise, he has already decided to devote his body for medical research after his death.

Tan Dun is a great composer. He was born in Central Hunan in 1958. He showed an interest in music when he was very young. He has brought Chinese and Western music together and has helped build a bridge between the East and the West.

Jackie Chan is a famous film star. He has acted in nearly 100 films and has won many awards. He has spent many years doing charity work. He has helped lots of people. He is considered as a superstar and is highly thought of by people.

They are all my heroes. From now on, I will learn from them.

【解析】

試題分析：1，仔細(xì)審題。注意題目的具體要求，明確寫作要求，確立文章要用的時(shí)態(tài)。本文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。2，注意寫作要點(diǎn)，理出寫作框架。本篇書面表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，應(yīng)注意將提示的內(nèi)容寫完全，不要遺漏。3，連句成篇，注意語(yǔ)言的連貫和過(guò)渡。在寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，會(huì)使文章過(guò)渡自然。最后還需檢查單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫等細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：文中使用了一些連接詞如so…that等等，也使用了一些復(fù)合句和并列句，這些都為文章增色不少。