Question

Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根據(jù)所給情景，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)
Situation: Nowadays many students go to school by bike, by car, by underground ... How do you go to school? What do you think of it? 眼下不少學(xué)生騎自行車、乘私家車、乘地鐵等方式上學(xué)。你是怎么去學(xué)校的？你覺得你的方式如何？談?wù)勀愕南敕ú⒑喪銎淅碛伞?br />Words and patterns for reference（以下單詞或詞組可供選用）
choice, convenient, save time, stop ... from
（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）

Answer 1

Nowadays many students go to school by bike, by car, by underground，but I think it’s a good choice to go to school by bike. Indeed ,I ride bike everyday.Here are some reasons. Firstly, it is convenient. Secondly ,it can save space,time and money.Thirdly ,it can save energy. Fourthly ,it can’t cause any kind of pollution. Fifthly, it can stop us from getting fatter. In a word,  riding bike is the best way to go to school.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文例舉騎自行車上學(xué)的幾大好處，來支持自己的觀點，全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如it’s a good choice to do，any kind of，stop ... from，in a word 等短語；賓語從句I think it’s a good choice to go to school by bike.；動名詞做主語如riding bike is the best way to go to school; it作形式主語，不定式作真正主語it’s a good choice to go to school by bike；用 Firstly,Secondly，Thirdly，F(xiàn)ourthly，F(xiàn)ifthly等詞進行例舉，使文章層次清晰，表達流暢。