Question

生活中總免不了會(huì)出些意外。作為一名中學(xué)生，除了平時(shí)要做有心人，盡量防止意外的發(fā)生，也應(yīng)當(dāng)掌握一些處理意外的知識(shí)。當(dāng)意外突然發(fā)生時(shí)，該如何處理呢？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的要點(diǎn)，給校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專欄寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?br />1. 了解一些緊急救護(hù)的電話和方法
2. 當(dāng)發(fā)生意外時(shí)，及時(shí)拔打緊急救護(hù)電話。
3. 清楚告訴對(duì)方發(fā)生的事情和地點(diǎn)
4. 保持冷靜，等待救援。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右；開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 應(yīng)覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3. 參考詞匯：emergency services緊急救護(hù)  operator（接線員）
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Answer 1

There are always some accidents in our life. So it’s very important to know what to do when accidents happen. First ,we need to know the number of the emergency services,such as 120,119 and 122 and some ways to protect ourselves. When an accident happens,and we can’t deal with it,we should call the numbers of the emergency services for help in time. We should tell the operator clearly what happens,where the place is and which service we need. Then we should keep calm and wait for help. We should try our best to help people in trouble when we see an accident.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者寫(xiě)當(dāng)發(fā)生意外時(shí)，應(yīng)該怎么樣。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如such as,deal with,for help,in time,wait for,keep calm,try our best,in trouble 等短語(yǔ)，文中還用到了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句when accidents happen，when we see an accident.賓語(yǔ)從句  We should tell the operator clearly……；不定式做賓語(yǔ)what to do；固定句型it’s very important to know；定語(yǔ)從句we need.文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。