Question

初中階段的學(xué)習(xí)和生活即將結(jié)束，你的老師陪伴你度過(guò)了三年的校園生活�；仡櫰渲械脑S多點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴，久久不能忘記。請(qǐng)你用英文給你的某一位教師寫(xiě)封信，和他(她)說(shuō)說(shuō)感激的心里話。
要點(diǎn)提示：

教師表現(xiàn)	1．工作努力，認(rèn)真； 2．教學(xué)耐心，待人友好。
留存記憶	1．嚴(yán)格要求也關(guān)愛(ài)學(xué)生； 2．師生相處和睦； 3．給予學(xué)習(xí)上和生活上的幫助; ……

要求：1．內(nèi)容包括所有提示要點(diǎn)，意思完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范。
2．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加細(xì)節(jié)，使語(yǔ)句連貫通暢。
3．文中不要出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校。
4．80－100詞左右，信的首尾巴寫(xiě)好．不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear my teacher,
Leaving you-lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say.
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Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and make much progress, too. You have given me so much.                                        
Thank you again for what you've done for us! All the best to you!
Yours,
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Answer 1

Dear my teacher,
Leaving you－lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say.
Since you became my English teacher three years ago, you’ve always been working hard. I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are. You’re strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly. All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years. I still remember when I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you told me to be brave.
Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and make much progress, too. You have given me so much.
Yours,
XXXX

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者主要寫(xiě)三年的校園生活的回憶，全文所用時(shí)態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，還有現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如from my heart ，be strict with,take care of ,get on well with ,each other等短語(yǔ)，文中還用到了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句 when I failed in an exam, When I had trouble in life,Since you became my English teacher three years ago, ；賓語(yǔ)從句 I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are.， All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years；感嘆句 how interesting your lessons are，how friendly you are.多種時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用自如，例如現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)you’ve always been working hard，一般將來(lái)時(shí)I won't forget，一般過(guò)去時(shí)when I failed in an exam.文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。