Question

霧霾最近成為人們最常談?wù)摰脑掝}，請(qǐng)根據(jù)你所了解的知識(shí)，寫(xiě)一篇不少于80字的保護(hù)環(huán)境的短文。

Answer 1

These days,there has been a thick haze in many areas of China.
The sky was full of haze. People couldn’t see far and even counld’t see the sun for days. What’s more,the bad weather lasted quite long.
The haze brought lots of problems. It not only affected traffic but also caused some illnesses.
Whay was the haze so serious? One of the main reasons is that there are more and more cars in China today. Factories also cause air pollution. Some farmers burn their straws.
To prevent haze,I think we should reduce pollution and try to protcet our environment.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文主要寫(xiě)霧霾的產(chǎn)生和影響，倡議保護(hù)環(huán)境，全文主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如was full of ，What’s more，not only...but also, One of,more and more , lots of等短語(yǔ)；表語(yǔ)從句that there are more and more cars in China today. 賓語(yǔ)從句I think we should reduce pollution and try to protcet our environment；不定式做狀語(yǔ) To prevent haze.令文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。