Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

假如你是李華,上周日你獨(dú)自在家照看你五歲的妹妹Nana,請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容,寫一篇短文。

活動(dòng)	上午	講故事，唱歌，……
	中午	煮面（cook noodles），休息（have a rest），……
	下午	玩游戲，看動(dòng)畫片（watch cartoons）……
感受	……

要求:1.參考表格內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

2.語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫,書(shū)寫工整;

3.文章不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等);

4.詞數(shù):不少于70詞。(開(kāi)頭已給出但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)

Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.

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Answer 1

【答案】Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.

In the morning, I told her many funny stories first. Then we sang and danced happily together. I also taught her to speak a few simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cooked noodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said they were delicious. I was very glad that she enjoyed the lunch. Then we had a rest. In the afternoon, we played games together. After that, we watched cartoons until my parents came back. I felt tired but happy.

【解析】寫作這篇作文是要求寫一份日�；顒�(dòng)的描述。描述一天的行為活動(dòng)。首先要注意的就是時(shí)態(tài)，寫作背景基于上周日，所以全文要使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，其次要注意各個(gè)短語(yǔ)的正確表達(dá)方式，最后不能忘記適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的感受。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：善于分段，可以用首段進(jìn)行概括性描述，闡明背景（my parents were not at home）。第二段可以進(jìn)一步開(kāi)始細(xì)節(jié)描述。涉及到的短語(yǔ)有told her many funny stories，sang and danced happily，taught her to speak a few simple English words，cooked noodles，had a rest等等，使用短語(yǔ)的時(shí)候也有亮點(diǎn)，能夠通過(guò)副詞happily或者介詞短語(yǔ)with tomatoes and eggs讓動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)的含義更加豐富。文章最后收尾簡(jiǎn)潔，用一句話點(diǎn)出了自己的感受，使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整。