Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

假如David是你的好朋友，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，以“My Friend David”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。

注意：1. 要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。

2. 詞數(shù)60左右。

要點(diǎn)：1.有一個(gè)健康的生活方式，兩餐之間從不吃零食。

2.早餐常吃雞蛋和面包，午餐常吃蔬菜和水果。

3.很少喝可樂(lè)，每周去他家附近的游泳池游泳。

4.最喜歡春節(jié)，因?yàn)榧胰藞F(tuán)聚并可以享用美餐。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My Friend David

I have a good friend. His name is David. He has a healthy lifestyle. And he never eats snacks between two meals. For breakfast, he often has eggs and bread. For lunch, he usually eats vegetables and fruit. But he seldom drinks Coke. He likes sports, so he goes to the swimming poor near his home to go swimming every week. He likes the Spring Festival best. Because all of family can get together to have a delicious meal.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的朋友David。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：His name is…，He has...，He likes...，so he goes to...，Because all of family can...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意要完整的表達(dá)出提綱中所列內(nèi)容。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來(lái)介紹他的生活方式：三餐、運(yùn)動(dòng)，最后介紹他最喜歡春節(jié)以及原因。此處have a healthy lifestyle, go swimming, every week, get together等這些詞組的運(yùn)用讓文章增色不少。連詞and, but，so，because的使用，讓文章連貫。