Question

【題目】作文

張明是個(gè)很聰明的學(xué)生，但他有一些不好的習(xí)慣，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的信息，用英文寫(xiě)一 篇短文，并針對(duì)他存在的一些問(wèn)題提出合理的建議。

姓名	張明
班級(jí)	七年級(jí)一班
外貌	大眼睛、矮而胖，短發(fā)，戴眼鏡
喜歡	唱歌、玩電腦游戲，喜歡吃漢堡、喝可樂(lè)
不喜歡	不喜歡游泳、跑步，不喜歡吃蔬菜
其它	常去他家前面的購(gòu)物中心，離他家不遠(yuǎn)
建議	至少兩條

具體要求：

1. 不少于100詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。

3. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Zhang Ming is a clever student.________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Li Ming is a clever student. He lives in Beijing.He studies in Beijing Sunshine Middle School.

He is in Class 1, Grade 7. He is good at Geography and History. He isn’t tall. He has big eyes and short hair. He wears glasses. He always wears trainers because they are light and comfortable.

He likes singing and playing computer games. He likes having snacks between meals, but he doesn’t like eating vegetables. He also dislikes swimming and running.

He often goes to the shopping mall in front of his home. It’s not far away from / near his home. It’s a good place to meet friends.

I think he must change his lifestyle. He should eat more vegetables because they are good for his health. He also needs to do some exercise like playingbasketballand running in his free time.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：范文中出現(xiàn)一些常見(jiàn)短語(yǔ)：is good at擅長(zhǎng)做某事likes singing喜歡做某事in front of在。。前面far away from與。。很遠(yuǎn)are good for對(duì)。。有好處。He always wears trainers because they are light and comfortable這個(gè)句子中becaue連接兩個(gè)因果關(guān)系的句子。He likes having snacks between meals, but he doesn’t like eating vegetables.這個(gè)句子中but表示轉(zhuǎn)折。He also needs to do some exercise like playingbasketballand running in his free time.這個(gè)句子中need是個(gè)實(shí)義動(dòng)詞需要，need to do需要做某事，like是介詞表示 象。。，and連接playing,running并列，所以時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。