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【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)為配合你校創(chuàng)建“綠色健康學(xué)�！惫ぷ鞯娜�面展開(kāi)，校學(xué)生會(huì)發(fā)起以“Make Our School Greener”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息寫(xiě)一篇英文短文。文章題目和開(kāi)頭已給出。

1.愛(ài)護(hù)校園內(nèi)的花草樹(shù)木；2.保持校園整潔，不亂扔廢棄物；

3.節(jié)約用水，離開(kāi)教室前記得關(guān)燈；4.堅(jiān)持鍛煉，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)，努力學(xué)習(xí)；

5.禮貌待人，同學(xué)間相處融洽，尊敬父母和老師。

注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2．覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3．參考詞匯：愛(ài)護(hù) protect; 亂扔廢棄物 drop litter; 堅(jiān)持 keep on doing; 尊敬 respect

Make Our School Greener

In order to make our campus green and harmonious to live and study in， it is suggested that we students should do many things,which can be listed as follows.

Answer 1

【答案】

Make Our School Greener

In order to make our campus green and harmonious to live and study in， it is suggested that we students should do many things,which can be listed as follows. First, we should protest the flowers and trees in the school. Secondly, We shouldn’t drop litter and try to keep the school clean and tidy. Thirdly,we should save water and turn off the lights when we leave the classroom. Fourthly,we should study hard and keep on doing exercise to keep healthy.Lastly,we should be polite to others , get on well with our classmates and we should respect our parents and teachers. I think our school will be greener and more beautiful if we follow these rules.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用提綱的給材料作文。要求寫(xiě)一篇“綠色健康學(xué)校”的作文。主要內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，我們?cè)趯?xiě)作時(shí)注意詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，適當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用連詞使文章通順流暢就可以了。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，思路清晰，邏輯性強(qiáng)，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見(jiàn)好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語(yǔ)，如First,，…Lastly ,keep on doing，be polite to，get on well with，等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

A. How long can I keep it? B. Who wrote it? C. Let’s go into that room. D. You should be quiet. No shouting in the library. E. Oh, here, it says the book is on the second shelf.