Question

【題目】有人喜歡住在城里，有人喜歡住在鄉(xiāng)下，你喜歡住在哪里呢？請寫一篇70個詞左右的短文，說說你喜歡住在那里的理由。

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Answer 1

【答案】Some people like living in the city. Some people like living in the countryside. I like living in the city. There are different kinds of shops in the cities. You can buy many things. When you go out, you can take a bus, a subway or a taxi. The schools in the city are nice and big. Although (雖然) cities are often noisy and the living cost is high, I like living in the city.

【解析】

亮點(diǎn)這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如like doing; live in; in the countryside; different kinds of; take a bus, a subway or a taxi; nice and big; do some cleaning; cook some food ;get home等。而When you go out, you can take a bus, a subway or a taxi. / Although (雖然) cities are often noisy and the living cost is high, I like living in the city.等多種狀語從句的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。