Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列對(duì)鹽城濕地的描寫(xiě),寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文,注意文章條理，語(yǔ)句通順。

鹽城濕地
位  置	江蘇北部
面  積	最大濕地面積450，000多公頃（hectare）
濕地介紹	是眾多鳥(niǎo)類(lèi)的理想庇護(hù)所
	食物豐富，有許多昆蟲(chóng)和多種植物
	許多鳥(niǎo)類(lèi)在那兒生活，最有名的是丹頂鶴，每年許多丹頂鶴在這兒過(guò)冬
你的的感想（至少兩點(diǎn)）	……

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Answer 1

Yancheng is a city in the north of Jiangsu. It is famous for its wetlands. The biggest wetland there has an area of more than 45,000 hectares. It’s an ideal cover for many birds.
There are a lot of insects and many kinds of plants in the wetland. They provide birds with enough food. So there are lots of birds living in the wetlands. The red-crowned cranes are the most famous birds in Yancheng wetlands. Every year, a lot of red-crowned cranes stay here for winter.
Wetlands are perfect homes for birds and animals. We must take actions to protect our wetlands. If we don’t, it will be impossible to see many birds in the future.

試題分析：本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: be famous for, provide … with；等。句中用了一些連詞so，if等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。