Question

假如你叫王浩，今天是開(kāi)學(xué)的第一天，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中所提供的信息，向班上的同學(xué)介紹一下你自己。詞數(shù)：50詞左右。

電話：5340261

家庭成員：祖父母、父母、叔嬸、堂弟和自己

愛(ài)好：排球、網(wǎng)球

收藏品（collection）：5個(gè)網(wǎng)球拍，4個(gè)排球

喜愛(ài)的食物：雞肉，蘋果

                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            

Answer 1

One possible version：
I’m Wang Hao. Nice to meet you! Let me introduce myself. I have a big family. There are eight people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents, my uncle, my aunt, my cousin and I. I like volleyball and tennis. I have five tennis rackets and four volleyballs. I like chicken and apples.  My phone number is 5340261.I hope to make friends with everyone.Thanks.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，假設(shè)自己是王浩并向同學(xué)介紹他自己的家人。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如There are ......，They are......及I like...... 等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己希望和大家交朋友。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了家庭成員，接下來(lái)自己的愛(ài)好，最后指出自己希望和大家交朋友。此處用了 introduce myself， hope to ，make friends with等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。