Question

姜堰四中為了激發(fā)中學(xué)生創(chuàng)意靈感，提高學(xué)習(xí)英語熱情，舉辦了題為“My dream home”的演講比賽。請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，完成演講稿。

房子大	有2層，可以和家人住在一起；后面有花園；
房間多	至少8個房間；一層有廚房、臥室……；二層有浴室、書房……
很舒適	可以和朋友在家聚會；放學(xué)后在書房做作業(yè)；早上在花園讀書；
其它	1.---  2.---

要求：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫；
2. 要點(diǎn)須包括表格中的信息，但不要使用真實姓名和校名等；
3. 詞數(shù)：80左右。信的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Ladies and Gentlemen :
I’d like to tell you about my dream home.
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Answer 1

Ladies and Gentlemen:
I’d like to tell you about my dream home. My dream home should be large enough so that I can live with my family. It has two floors with a beautiful garden behind it. And there are at least eight rooms, including kitchen, bedrooms, shower room and reading room. Besides, it must be comfortable. At weekends, I can have parties with my friends at home. After school I will do my homework in the reading room and in the morning I read books in the garden. I think I will have a happy life with my family here.

試題分析：這是一篇演講稿，題目中已經(jīng)給出了標(biāo)題和相關(guān)的信息點(diǎn)。在寫作時，要緊扣這些要點(diǎn)，并且適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容更完善，結(jié)構(gòu)更完整。寫作時注意句子的完整性和表達(dá)的正確性，尤其注意主謂一致。文章可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞，使邏輯更嚴(yán)密。
【亮點(diǎn)分析】
這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利。文中用到了很多有用的短語和表達(dá)方式，例如：so that所以，以便于； at least 最少；at weekends在周末；It has two floors with a beautiful garden behind it.有兩層樓，并且后面有個花園。With，有……；I think I will have a happy life with my family here我想我會和家人在這里幸福的生活。