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【題目】幸福是什么？是一本有趣的書，是遠(yuǎn)方朋友的問候，是爸爸媽媽的笑容，是……。不同的人有不同的快樂和幸福。請(qǐng)你以“My Happiness”為題，寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>
要求：1).內(nèi)容需包含圖表中所有信息;
2).詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3).適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

My Happiness
If you ask me what happiness is, it's easy to answer. Different people have different opinions. As for me,

Answer 1

【答案】My Happiness
If you ask me what happiness is, it's easy to answer. Different people have different opinions. As for me, I think I have a happy life.
Firstly, my happiness comes from my family. My parents love me very much. My father often tells some jokes to make me laugh. My mother can give me many useful suggestions. Being with my family is the most relaxing.
Secondly, my happiness comes from success. When I work out a math problem, I often feel happy. When I receive the praise form the teachers, the happiness comes.
Thirdly, my happiness comes from my friends. We often play together and get along well with each other.
I also feel happy when I help others.
【解析】這是一篇命題作文，要求以My happiness為題，說說什么是自己的幸福。根據(jù)要求，短文主要說明what“是什么”和why“為什么”，說說自己認(rèn)為幸福的是什么，并且說說為什么這樣認(rèn)為。給人帶來幸福的是多方面的東西，所以短文也可以從多個(gè)角度，不同的方面介紹什么是自己的幸福及其原因。短文可以舉一些故事細(xì)節(jié)來說明自己的觀點(diǎn)。短文用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行表達(dá)。