Question

Writing 8(2012 廣東)

A.信息歸納

    請(qǐng)閱讀下面這篇文章，根據(jù)所提供的信息，完成下面表格。

BBC World Have Your Say “Life inChina”

      Every day,BBC News on TV,radio and online brings you stories from across the world...But what we want to hear are the stories that matter to you.

      Have you got a story about life inChinatoday? If you do,please put your story here.

      I like traveling and I have traveled a lot around China.During the trip,I often find that a number of Chinese don't have good public manners (舉止) . They always talk loudly on the phone and smoke everywhere.The worst is that they often break the rules in public. For example,when I traveled in Hong Kong in January this year,I saw a kid eating noodles on the underground,which is against the rules.However,the kids mother didn’t think he did wrong. Can you believe it? Let5s improve our public manners.(Mike,Shenzhen)

     I am a 14-year-old boy from a poor village in Fuyting,Anhui Province. Like many other leftbehind children (留守兒童) in China,I live with my grandparents now. My father went to work in Shanghai several years ago. Last year,my mother went there to care for him because his health is not as good as before.They tell me to listen to my grandpar- ents and call me about twice a month to ask about my study.I really miss my parents and I hope I can afford to go to school in Shanghai. I think every child needs parents' love and care.(Wu Peigen,Anhui Province) 

                      Information Card

The topic of BBC   World Have  Your Say today	1.
The thing   that the kid did on the   underground	2.
The time when   Mike traveled in Hong Kong	3.
Wu Peigen’s   age	4.
People who   live with Wu Peigen now	5.

B.書面表達(dá)

    假設(shè)你是一名叫李明(Li Ming) 的中學(xué)生，看了上述故事后，你想表達(dá)自己的看法。請(qǐng)你給欄目編輯寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

    1.對(duì)其中的哪一個(gè)故事感興趣？原因是什么？

    2.你對(duì)這個(gè)故事所提及的現(xiàn)象的看法。

    3.就該現(xiàn)象提出至少兩條解決問題的建議。

    作文要求：

    1. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。

    2. 語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

Dear Editor,

I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            

Yours ,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

Writing 8

A. 信息歸納

[語篇解讀]本文根據(jù)“Life in China”這個(gè)主題展開了討論，文中主要講了兩個(gè)有代表性的小故事，發(fā)人深省。

1. Life in China. topic 主題，由文章的第一‘句 BBC World Have Your.Say: “ Life in China” 可知答案。

2. Eating noodles.由第—t*故事中的第五句中的“I saw a kid eating noodles on the underground” 可得出答案。

3. In January this year./This January.第一'個(gè)故事中的第五句中 “ when I traveled in Hong Kong in January this year” 直接給出了答案。

4. 14/Fourteen (years old) .由第二個(gè)故事中的第一句話“I am a 14-year-old boy from a poor... ” 可知答案。

5. His grandparents. 由第二個(gè)故事中的第二句中的“I live with my grandparents now” 可知答案。

B. 書面表達(dá) [寫作要點(diǎn)]

1. 本文是一封電子郵件，建議人稱用第一人稱，基本時(shí)態(tài)用一般 現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

2. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):要按照題目規(guī)定的內(nèi)容一一寫清楚。

3. 參考詞匯:be interested in對(duì) 感興趣;in fact事實(shí)上;in my o- pinion 在我看來;on the other hand 另一'方面。

[參考范文1]

Dear Editor,

   I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today.I am interested in Mike^ story,because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou. I canH stand bad manners in public,either.In fact,I really get angry when people jump the queue and smoke in nonsmoking area. I think it’s wrong to break the rules in public. In my opinion,we should know more about good manners.On the other hand,we had better stop people around us from being rude.If we can^ stop them,we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.

Yours,

Li Ming

[參考范文2]

Dear Editor,

     I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today.I am interested in Wu Peigen’s story,because one of my friends is a leftbehind child too. He has been living with his grandparents since he was six. I can understand how hard life is for leftbehind children.I think it’s best for children to grow up under the care of their parents. In my opinion,we can join some social groups to offer help to leftbehind children. We can visit and make friends with them.On the other hand,they should be allowed to go to school in the city for free.

Yours, 

Li Mins