Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，我們會(huì)有許多的第一次。第一次獨(dú)自旅行，第一次克服困難，第一次贏得比賽……每個(gè)第一次都會(huì)帶給我們不同的收獲和感受。我校英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“My first time to________”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勛屇阌洃洩q新的第一次。

內(nèi)容提示：(1) What happened?

(2)How did you feel?

要求：(1)中心突出，語(yǔ)義連貫，層次清晰，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；

(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；

(3)詞數(shù)80左右。

My first time to _____________

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

My first time to swim

As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I learned to swim.

Last summer holiday, I wanted to learn how to swim. I asked my father to teach me. I went to the swimming pool with my father. He taught me how to swim. At first, I was afraid of diving in the water. And I felt uncomfortable in the water. But my father always encouraged me. He said he would protect me. Then I began to swim，but I couldn't swim forward at all. It made me upset. Then my father told me how to move，how to stretch out my hands and legs. Slowly I could move a little. It took me about four hours to learn to swim. I felt quite happy.

What an unforgettable experience it was!

【解析】

1.題干解讀：本文要求根據(jù)“My first time to________”為主題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；再根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)、自然流暢。