Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給�？�“英語園地”寫一篇英文稿件,講述上周發(fā)生在你們班的一個(gè)真實(shí)故事。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60 。

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Answer 1

【答案】 I had always felt that the last year of senior high school was the bitterest time of my life, until last Friday.

At lunch break, my classmate and I went to the teacher’s office to ask questions, only to find our math teacher sleeping with her head on the arms, some medicine beside her, as well as some exercise books. Then we hurried back to our classroom. I placed a chair behind the teacher’s desk, and my friend put a glass of warm water on it.

Entering the classroom, our teacher smiled at what we had done, and soon began her lesson. We all felt worried when hearing her cough from time to time. We listened attentively and tried to memorize every point she mentioned. After school, some of us visited her in the office with some fruits and snacks. And our teacher was still busy working at her desk…

That day, I realized we were lucky to have these dedicated teachers and that the busy days were not bitter but bitter-sweet.

【解析】

這是一篇看圖寫作，根據(jù)所給四幅圖的先后順序，給校刊“英語園地”寫一篇英文稿件。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個(gè)方面的信息。假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給校刊“英語園地”寫一篇英文稿件,講述上周發(fā)生在你們班的一個(gè)真實(shí)故事。人稱為第一人稱。時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為四段。第一段，引入話題。第二段和第三段，講述事情經(jīng)過。第四段，感悟。

第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語: the bitterest；attentively；memorize；dedicated；as well as ；

from time to time等。

第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過渡銜接；注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。