Question

【題目】當(dāng)今全球環(huán)境問題變得越來越嚴(yán)重。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)漫畫內(nèi)容，以李華的名義給“China Daily”寫一封信，描述這種狀況，并提出保護(hù)環(huán)境的建議。

注意：

1．不要拘泥于要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，詞數(shù)100左右。

2．參考詞匯：人口膨脹：population expansion；過度開發(fā)：overdevelopment

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Yours sincerely,

Ll hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.

With the development of society, private cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas, which does great harm to the environment. As we all know, waste water from factories is poured continuously into rivers without being treated. Worse still, because of population expansion and overdevelopment, the problem of lack of water is becoming more and more serious. With trees on the hills cut down, the whole ecological balance of the earth is being damaged. It cannot be denied that massive destruction of the environment has brought about negative effects and become a great threat to man’s existence.

In my opinion, our government should spare no effort to let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection and take more concrete measures to deal with it. We hope that all these measures will be of great use and only in this way can a healthy environment be brought back.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求根據(jù)漫畫給“China Daily”寫一封信，描述全球環(huán)境問題，并提出保護(hù)環(huán)境的建議。文章給出了提綱，成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全。(2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】1.使用高級(jí)句型：獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)和which引導(dǎo)的定語從句With the development of society, private cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas, which does great harm to the environment.；as引導(dǎo)的定語從句As we all know, waste water from factories is poured continuously into rivers without being treated...；部分倒裝only in this way can a healthy environment be brought back。2.使用了過渡詞語：Worse still，In my opinion等；3.使用了重要短語：give off發(fā)出，釋放，cut down砍倒，spare no effort to不遺余力的做，take measures采取措施。