假如你是李越，你的兩位朋友Tom和Peter幾天前發(fā)生了爭吵。9月12日是Peter的生日，Tom想送他一個(gè)禮物來緩和關(guān)系，修復(fù)友情，因此特地發(fā)來郵件尋求你的建議。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Tom回一封郵件：

禮物選擇；

你的理由；

其他和解建議；

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100-120；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter.

 

 

 

 

Best wishes!

Li Yue

 

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.

As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go on an outing by bike together, which is helpful in rebuilding your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally friendly means of transport. It’s convenient for him to get around as well. Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner or going shopping together. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that you can be good friends forever.

Best wishes!

Li Yue

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來. 動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語consider doing 考慮做某事；As far as I know據(jù)我所知；build up增強(qiáng)；In the meanwhile與此同時(shí)；Apart from除了；If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用到虛擬語氣；In the meanwhile, you can often go on an outing by bike together, which is helpful in rebuilding your friendship.這個(gè)句子which引導(dǎo)一個(gè)非限制性定語從句；Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally friendly means of transport.這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用到動名詞做主語；No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important.這個(gè)句子中no matter 引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句和動名詞做主語；

考點(diǎn)： 提綱類作文

 

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