Question

【題目】假定你是李華。你們班的外教Smith先生即將回國。你將代表全班在歡送會上發(fā)言。請你用英文發(fā)言稿， 內(nèi)容包括：

1. 贊揚Smith 的人品和工作。

2. 感謝他在學習和生活中給予的幫助。

3. 表達對Smith的祝福。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫。

Dear Mr. Smith,

It’s hard to say “goodbye”. Words cannot convey our endless love and thanks to you, for you’ve done so much for us in these years. _____________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

It’s hard to say “goodbye”. Words cannot convey our endless love and thanks to you, for you’ve done so much for us in these years.

You are so humorous and easy-going that everyone wants to be your friends. We do appreciate the way of your teaching. It seems that you have magic to make your lectures lively and interesting. With your guidance, all of us have made great progress. You care about not only our study but also our life. Whenever we’re in trouble, you’re always the first man we can depend on. After class you often join us in games, during which we’ve shared much happiness.

Thank you again for everything you’ve done for us. Wish you a safe journey home and a happy life in the future.

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。文章內(nèi)容要點已經(jīng)給出。同學們在寫這篇文章時，要注意以下幾點：1. 通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主。2. 要點要齊全。但是不要對要點進行簡單的羅列�？梢允褂眠m當?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程。3.

注意語氣。既然該文是歡送會上的發(fā)言稿，所以要注意語氣應該比較懇切。該文的寫作難點在第二條內(nèi)容上：感謝他在學習和生活中給予的幫助。一定要通過簡單的例子作為支撐。否則會顯得說服力不夠，內(nèi)容不夠豐滿。寫這部分內(nèi)容時，學生可以采取簡單句和復合句結合的方法。

【范文亮點】

1. 范文采取了狀語從句（Whenever we’re in trouble, you’re always the first man we can depend on..）；非限定性定語從句（After class you often join us in games, during which we’ve shared much happiness.）及（it is hard to do…）和（It seems that…）等句式。

2. 文章采用了easy-going； guidance；make great progress；depend on等高級單詞或短語。