Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是李華，是高三某班班長。為了豐富同學(xué)們的課外生活，班級準(zhǔn)備成立一個(gè)自行車俱樂部(cycling club)。請你根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語寫一則口頭通知。通知如下：

1. 每周訓(xùn)練一次，由體育老師輔導(dǎo)，安排在每周三下午第三節(jié)的課外活動時(shí)間；

2. 注意事項(xiàng)：自備自行車；活動免費(fèi)。

3. 到班長那里報(bào)名。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)120左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 文章開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Attention, please, everyone. Ever since we entered Senior 3, we’ve burdened ourselves with a lot of work. __________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

Attention, please, everyone. Ever since we entered Senior 3, we’ve burdened ourselves with a lot of work. To make ourselves enjoy a colorful life out of our daily study, we’ve decided to set up a cycling club and organize some activities.

We plan to offer basic training once a week, which will be instructed by our PE teacher. It will fall on the third period in the afternoon, when students can have after-class activities.

It is desired that you take time to join our club, as it is a great way to keep fit and a good chance to relax ourselves. What needs to be specifically noted is that the activity is free of charge, but you should bring your bicycle along.

Those who have interest can go to the monitor and sign up.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)是一篇提綱作文。提綱作文寫作的時(shí)候注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語set up建立；It is desired that大家希望；keep fit保持健康；We plan to offer basic training once a week, which will be instructed by our PE teacher這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用到which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句；What needs to be specifically noted is that the activity is free of charge, but you should bring your bicycle along.這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用到what引導(dǎo)主語從句，that引導(dǎo)表語從句；