4．一家英語報社向中學生征文，主題是"十年后的我"，請根據(jù)下列要點和你的暢想完成短文．
1．家庭：
2．工作：
3．業(yè)余生活．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語已為你寫好．
I often imagine what my life would be like in the future．_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

分析 本文是一篇記敘文，主題是"十年后的我"．在寫作時要注意從家庭、工作和業(yè)余生活三方面要點著手，因為提示信息較少，所以要充分發(fā)揮想象，增加適當?shù)募毠?jié)以使行文連貫，充實內(nèi)容．比如可以聯(lián)想到的內(nèi)容有健身，度假，聚會等等．在寫作時盡量使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞，插入語以使文章層次分明，使用多種句式結(jié)構和高級詞匯亮點來提高文章的檔次，如定語從句，賓語從句和狀語從句等．此外，因為是暢想未來，所以要用一般將來時．
（高分句型一） I often imagine what my life would be like in the future．
what…引導一個賓語從句，放在動詞imagine后，意思是想象未來生活是什么樣子．
（高分句型二）I'will do a good job in whatever I do
whatever i do放在in后面，引導一個賓語從句；
（高分句型三）In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．
句子里使用兩個形容詞的比較級much richer and more colorful，加強語氣的作用．

解答 （高分句型一） I often imagine what my life would be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．i will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child．I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer．I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．（高分句型二）I'will do a good job in whatever I do．In my free time，I will continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I will travel around the world．（高分句型三）In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．

點評 本篇范文短小精悍，要點全面，語言簡練，時態(tài)人稱準確，很好的完成了寫作任務．在文章開頭作者緊扣題目，提出自己對未來的暢想，然后從生活，工作，家庭三個方面描述了自己十年后的生活．在文中作者用到了短語In my free time，In a word，such as等介詞短語，避免了文章句式的單一．此外，還用到了賓語從句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等，這些都給樸素的語言帶來了亮點．

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