【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

It was almost five years since I began to learn English. I’m glad to say I’m getting along well with it. However, first I came across a lot of difficulties. I couldn’t pronounce English sounds good, nor could I remember the words I had learned. In class, I couldn’t understand that the teacher had said. I almost lost my heart when the teacher said to me, “Keeping on and you will do well.” I was greatly encouraging. I started working hard at English. With the help by my teacher and classmates, I made some progresses. I’m very pleased, but I will work harder.

【答案】

【1】was 改為is

【2】first前加at

【3】good 改為well

【4】that 改為what

【5】lost my heart 去掉my

【6】Keeping改為Keep

【7】encouraging改為encouraged

【8】With the help by改為With the help of

【9】progresses改為progress

【10】but改為and

【解析】

【1】was 改為is 考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。It is +時(shí)間+since 自從。。已經(jīng)已久了；

【2】first前加at 考查短語(yǔ)。At first 首先；

【3】good 改為well 考查副詞。句意：我不能很好的發(fā)音，修飾動(dòng)詞pronounce用副詞形式；

【4】that 改為what 考查賓語(yǔ)從句，句意：在課堂上，我不能理解老師所說(shuō)的，what引導(dǎo)understand的賓語(yǔ)從句；

【5】lost my heart 去掉my 考查固定短語(yǔ)。Lose heart 失去信心；

【6】Keeping改為Keep 考查固定句型。祈使句+and+陳述句。

【7】encouraging改為encouraged 考查形容詞 。句意：我倍受鼓勵(lì)。修飾人用ed結(jié)構(gòu)；

【8】With the help by改為With the help of 考查固定短語(yǔ)。With the help of 在，，的幫助下；

【9】 progresses改為progress 考查固定短語(yǔ)。Make progress取得進(jìn)步；progress是不可數(shù)名詞。

【10】but改為and 考查連詞。句意：我很高興并且很努力，兩個(gè)句子是并列連接；

考點(diǎn) ：短文改錯(cuò)。

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