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【題目】現(xiàn)在，越來(lái)越多的年輕人喜歡在網(wǎng)上點(diǎn)餐或打電話叫外賣，不愿意自己做飯，就這一現(xiàn)象結(jié)合下面的提示寫一篇100詞左右的短文。

1. 陳述現(xiàn)象；

2. 此現(xiàn)象的原因（至少2點(diǎn)）；

3. 你個(gè)人的看法和選擇。

注意： 1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．行文連貫，語(yǔ)篇完整；

3．文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)信息。

參考詞匯：take-out restaurant 外賣店，外賣餐館

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Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version

Nowadays, a growing number of young people would rather order food on the Internet or call a take-out restaurant for meals than cook at home.

It’s not surprising for them to do so. For one thing, with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster, time is quite precious. In their eyes, it is unnecessary to take time to cook. For another thing, home cooking food is simpler in kind and less delicious, especially for those who are particular about food.

In my view, our health is closely related to what we eat. The busier we are, the more attention we should pay to food. Therefore, I prefer to cook food at home and go on a balanced diet.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類話題作文，要求對(duì)現(xiàn)在的年輕人喜歡在網(wǎng)上點(diǎn)餐或打電話叫外賣，不愿意自己做飯這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行評(píng)論。提綱要點(diǎn)已給出，根據(jù)提綱，文章可分三段來(lái)寫：第一段陳述現(xiàn)象，此段要簡(jiǎn)短；第二段分析原因，注意至少講出兩點(diǎn)；第三段談自己的看法和選擇。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全。(2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】1.使用高級(jí)句型：would rather do than do 結(jié)構(gòu)：a growing number of young people would rather order food on the Internet or call a take-out restaurant for meals than cook at home；獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster隨著現(xiàn)代生活節(jié)奏越來(lái)越快；定語(yǔ)從句 especially for those who are particular about food；賓語(yǔ)從句our health is closely related to what we eat.2.使用了過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)：For one thing,For another thing. In my view，Therefore. 3.使用了重要短語(yǔ)：are particular about講究，對(duì)挑剔，is closely related to和…緊密相關(guān)。