Question

20．下個月校報編輯部將為同學(xué)們開設(shè)"Say you，say me"專欄．現(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，向校報投稿．
1）給你留下印象最深的同學(xué)是誰？
2）他（她）做了什么事情讓你印象深刻？
3）你從此事中悟到了什么？
注意：
1．可以敘述自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事；
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．詞數(shù)120左右．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫．
I'd like to say something about         ．

Answer 1

分析 本文為投稿文．
寫作要點(diǎn)為：1）給你留下印象最深的同學(xué)是誰？
2）他（她）做了什么事情讓你印象深刻？
3）你從此事中悟到了什么？

解答 I'd like to say something about my best friend Lily，who is optimistic and crazy about flowers．Last term there was a potted plant in our classroom．Every morning，the first thing Lily would do was walk to the plant to see whether everything was all right．Then she watered it and enjoyed its loveliness．When asked why，she answered that because the plant needed her praise．With the daily praises and tender loving care the plant bloomed at last．So did Lily's face．The flowers brought Lily satisfaction because of the wonders of their beauty，and she conveyed the happiness to all of us．With a kind and rosy heart，Lily makes everyone around her comfortable．
    The plants need our admiration just as we need others'support．Thus，we can lead a blessed life．Everyone welcomes love，like a flower welcomes the sunshine．

點(diǎn)評 考生需了解寫作要點(diǎn)及寫作意圖，仔細(xì)構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．