Question

20．中國(guó)民工學(xué)校狀況越來(lái)越受到人們的關(guān)注，假設(shè)你是李華，你和你的同學(xué)共同對(duì)你所在的城市的民工學(xué)校進(jìn)行了調(diào)查．了解情況之后你寫信給英語(yǔ)周報(bào)，呼吁全社會(huì)關(guān)注民工學(xué)校，幫助民工子弟．
[寫作內(nèi)容]：
民工學(xué)校的現(xiàn)狀1、設(shè)施簡(jiǎn)陋
2、師資缺乏
3、民工子弟熱愛(ài)學(xué)習(xí)
改善民工學(xué)�，F(xiàn)狀的建議政府方面：資金的投入
學(xué)生方面：…（至少提兩個(gè)建議）
呼吁全社會(huì)的人關(guān)注民工學(xué)校
[寫作要求]：
1、只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)所有 寫作內(nèi)容，信的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入句子個(gè)數(shù)．
2、文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
[參考詞匯]：民工學(xué)校：migrant school
Dear Editor，
Recently，my classmates and I made a survey about the migrant schools in our city．Problems do exist．
                                                     
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In order to improve the situation，we think our government should take measures to pour more money into migrant schools．動(dòng)詞不定式在句中使用的恰到好處，同時(shí)還運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句
高分句型二
We do hope that the whole society can care more about migrant kids，because if everyone contributes a bit，migrant kids can surely enjoy equal education opportunity．
句型一 ①In order to improve the situation 動(dòng)詞不定式在句中作目的狀語(yǔ) 
            ②our government should take measures to pour more money into migrant schools．該句是省略的引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句，同時(shí)賓語(yǔ)從句的謂語(yǔ)部分使用了重要短語(yǔ)：take measures to do sth 采取措施做某事
句型二 ①that the whole society can care more about migrant kids 該句是that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，that只作引導(dǎo)詞
            ②if everyone contributes a bit 該句是一個(gè)位于because后面的原因狀語(yǔ)從句

解答 Dear Editor，
   Recently，my classmates and I made a survey about the migrant schools in our city．Problems do exist．Owing to the lack of money，most migrant schools have no modern equipments，no playground，no libraries，and even not enough teachers．However，we find that the migrant kids are just as keen on study as us．In order to improve the situation，we think our government should take measures to pour more money into migrant schools．（高分句型一）As for us，the local students，can help to collect money or donate books to them．（描述情況）
   We do hope that the whole society can care more about migrant kids，because if everyone contributes a bit，migrant kids can surely enjoy equal education opportunity．（高分句型二）（提出建議）
Yours sincerely，
LiHua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點(diǎn)．考生在平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語(yǔ)，在寫作時(shí)盡量做到將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡(jiǎn)潔明了的語(yǔ)言將作文展示出來(lái)．