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【題目】假如你是李明，是景華中學(xué)一名高二學(xué)生。你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學(xué)每次遇到重要考試，都會出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀。請你用英語寫一封信，向某學(xué)生英文報編輯反映該問題。信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括下列要點：

焦慮癥狀	建議
頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等	1. 考前制訂合適的復(fù)習(xí)計劃。 2. 考試期間正常作息。 3. 睡前洗熱水澡、 喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠。
	其他建議（內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定）

注意：1．根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫。

2．詞數(shù)：100左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3．參考詞匯：頭暈dizzy．

Dear editor，

I am Li Ming，a Senior Three student in Jinghua Middle School．I am writing to tell you

about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams．

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor，

I am Li Ming, a Senior three student in Jinghua Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams．

Most of us feel nervous whenever we are taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. (In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and) we are all eager to get rid of them．

First of all，we should study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Second, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore，during the period of exams， we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep. (In my opinion, it is important for us to have a right attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. ) Besides, we’d better go out for a walk or take some outdoor exercise before and after an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed (and then concentrate ourselves on exams. )

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：本文是寫一封信，關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，本文的主題是部分同學(xué)每次遇到重要考試，都會出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀這一現(xiàn)象，考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系。靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

【亮點說明】學(xué)生寫作要有靈活性，同時要表現(xiàn)出較好的英語語言表達能力。文章使用了很好的短語和句子：have terrible effects on 對...有很壞的影響；be eager to熱切做某事； get rid of 擺脫；First of all首先； Second第二點； Therefore因此； Besides,還有； In my opinion在我看來； getting along with與...相處， concentrate on集中在某事； stay up 熬夜， Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite.是并列句，we’d better go out for a walk or take some outdoor exercise before and after an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed 是結(jié)果狀語從句，They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results.句子很高級出色。