Question

【題目】假如你是李華，一名16歲的女生，目前在南陽一中就讀。你發(fā)現(xiàn)很多學(xué)生壓力巨大，因此向某報(bào)紙編輯Peter寫信，分享你的適應(yīng)高中生活的辦法。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括：

1.確定新的學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)，養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣；

2.學(xué)會獨(dú)立生活，健康生活；

3.參加課外活動，減輕壓力，拓展視野；

4.處理好人際關(guān)系。

注意：

1.內(nèi)容要連貫完整，可適當(dāng)增添內(nèi)容；

2.詞數(shù)：120左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am Li Hua,a girl aged 16,presently attending Nanyang No.1 Middle School.Recently I have noticed that most of the students are under great stress.Facing such serious situations,I’d like to share my advice on how to adopt to the senior high school life.

First of all,we should set goals in study and develop good learning habits such as previewing and reviewing regularly.Besides, as we are away from parents,we are supposed to live on our own such as doing some washing and cleaning by ourselves;Furthermore,we should keep away from junk food and never get addicted to the Net.What's more,we had better take part in after-class activities in our spare time,which will help us reduce stress and broaden our horizons.Last but not least,we need to get along well with teachers and classmates,with whom we can share whatever we have in common.I have confidence that we can get used.to the senior high school life by doing so.

Looking forward to your early reply as soon as possibly.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇提綱作文，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括：確定新的學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)，養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣；學(xué)會獨(dú)立生活，健康生活；參加課外活動，減輕壓力，拓展視野；處理好人際關(guān)系。

首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來。寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一篇提綱作文，內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，句子銜接緊密，文中使用高級句子。I am Li Hua,a girl aged 16,presently attending Nanyang No.1 Middle School句中使用過去分詞和現(xiàn)在分詞做定語；.Facing such serious situations,I’d like to share my advice on how to adopt to the senior high school life.現(xiàn)在分詞做時(shí)間狀語；as we are away from parents,we are supposed to live on our own such as doing some washing and cleaning by ourselves;as引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句；which will help us reduce stress and broaden our horizons.which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；with whom we can share whatever we have in common句中with+whom引導(dǎo)定語從句，同時(shí)使用whatever引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；另外，First of all, Besides, Furthermore, What's more, Last but not least,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。