Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假定你是李華，將于今年七月從新星外語學(xué)校畢業(yè)，你從報(bào)紙上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘書，你很感興趣。請(qǐng)給該公司寫一封求職信，包括下列要點(diǎn)：

1．成績優(yōu)秀； 2. 能熟練使用電腦； 3. 業(yè)余愛好…

注意： 1.詞數(shù)不少于50； 2.開頭語和結(jié)束語不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. __________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Sir/Madam,

I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. I’m really interested in this position and hope I can work for you.

I will be graduating from Xinxing Foreign Language School this July. I’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. Skilled at using computers, I can type very fast. In my spare time, I read a lot. Poems are my favorite. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides, I’m easy to get along with and I like to make friends.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

【解析】

試題分析：本問是一篇求職信，內(nèi)容是關(guān)于自己的優(yōu)點(diǎn)1．成績優(yōu)秀；2. 能熟練使用電腦；3. 業(yè)余愛好。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時(shí)可以按照提示的3個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行說明。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。以第一人稱為主。4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如非謂語動(dòng)詞Skilled at using computers和Being an active young person作狀語, 此外，文章還使用了短語among the top 5,get along with和besides的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。