Question

12．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤．對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上劃一個勾（√），如果有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉．該行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞．該行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．注意：原行沒有錯的不要改．
Last Saturday we had a party at home．Dad's friends come                   66．come改為came 
Along with their families．Since Mom was not at home，Dad               67．√
And I had to prepare everything，so it turned out such a miracle           68．so改為but
That they did make it!Everything went perfectly fine.69．they改為we
A lot of kids who came that day．I had the most wonderful time             70．who去掉
With Steven．It was just amazed to find someone to much                      71．a(chǎn)mazed改為amazing
Like me．We had a lot of things by common．The time seemed               72．by改為in
short to me，and I wished we could have some more time                         73．had去掉
to continue the conversation．Hopeful we're going on                               74．Hopeful改為Hopefully
a trip together next summer，and also summer after next.75．加the．

Answer 1

分析 文章講述了上個星期六我們在家聚會的經(jīng)歷．父親的朋友和家人來家做客，母親不在家，我和父親準備好了一切．我們玩得很開心，希望以后還可以聚會．

解答

Last Saturday we had a party at home．Dad's friends come	66．	come改為came
Along with their families．Since Mom was not at home，Dad	67．	√
And I had to prepare everything，so it turned out such a miracle	68．	so改為but
That they did make it!Everything went perfectly fine．	69．	they改為we
A lot of kids who came that day．I had the most wonderful time	70．	who去掉
With Steven．It was just amazed to find someone to much	71．	amazed改為amazing
Like me．We had a lot of things by common．The time seemed	72．	by改為in
short to me，and I wished we could have had some more time	73．	had去掉
to continue the conversation．Hopeful we're going on	74．	Hopeful改為Hopefully
a trip together next summer，and also∧summer after next．	75．	加the．

詳解：
66．come改為came；考查時態(tài)．文章講述的是過去發(fā)生的動作，要用一般過去時態(tài)．
67．正確．
68．so改為but；考查連詞．句意表達的是轉折，不是承接．
69．they改為we；考查代詞．句意指代的是我們，不是他們．
70．who去掉；考查句型結構．這是一個簡單句，不能加連詞．
71．a(chǎn)mazed改為amazing；考查分詞．句中amaze作系動詞的表語，要用非謂語動詞；amazed表示人的感受，句意表達的是事物的特征，要用現(xiàn)在分詞形式．
72．by改為in；考查短語搭配．have…in common具有共同點．
73．had去掉；考查謂語結構．句中could后接動詞原形，表示希望；could后接完成時態(tài)表示的是對過去的推測，不符合句意．
74．Hopeful改為Hopefully；考查副詞．句中hopefully修飾整個句子，要用副詞．
75．加the；考查冠詞．句中summer表示特指后年的夏天，要用定冠詞．

點評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎知識．�？嫉闹�識點有：名詞（單復數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．