Question

12．假如你是高二學(xué)生小王，在復(fù)習(xí)準(zhǔn)備迎接期末考中遇到煩惱時(shí)，你的同學(xué)給過你很多鼓勵(lì)和幫助，你深有感觸．
現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語寫一篇100-120個(gè)詞的短文．要求如下：
1．你的煩惱
2．同學(xué)如何鼓勵(lì)和幫助到你
3．你的感觸
With the final-exam drawing near，___________________________________
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們以高二學(xué)生小王的身份，就在復(fù)習(xí)準(zhǔn)備迎接期末考中遇到煩惱，同學(xué)給過你很多鼓勵(lì)和幫助此事寫一篇作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過去時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：你的煩惱，同學(xué)如何鼓勵(lì)和幫助到你，你的感觸．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為作者的煩惱以及同學(xué)的鼓勵(lì)和幫助．第二部分為作者對(duì)此事的感觸．
 重點(diǎn)短語與句型：
for fear that 生怕…
be  in low spirits情緒低落
 encourage sb  to do sth鼓勵(lì)某人做某事
as long as只要
高分句型一：With the final-exam drawing near，I was feeling more and more stressed for fear that I would fail in the exam．此句用了with+賓語+賓語補(bǔ)足語
高分句型二：I believed no matter how hard I worked，I wouldn't pass the exam，which may disappoint my parents and teachers．此句用了no matter+疑問詞引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句
高分句型三：It was my classmate Tom who often chatted with me after class to make me relaxed and encouraged me to overcome myself此句用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型it was…who…
高分句型四：What he said made me realize that whether to get higher exam marks is not my real goal此句結(jié)合了主語從句與賓語從句．

解答 With the final-exam drawing near，I was feeling more and more stressed for fear that I would fail in the exam．（高分句型一） I believed no matter how hard I worked，I wouldn't pass the exam，which may disappoint my parents and teachers．（高分句型二） Therefore，I was in low spirits．It was my classmate Tom who often chatted with me after class to make me relaxed and encouraged me to overcome myself．（高分句型三） Later on，I felt more relaxed without so much pressure．（作者的煩惱以及同學(xué)的鼓勵(lì)和幫助）
    What he said made me realize that whether to get higher exam marks is not my real goal（高分句型四）．The most important thing is that one should always dream to be better．As long as I try my best and keep up the spirit of not giving up，everything is going well．（作者對(duì)此事的感觸）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧