Question

20．春節(jié)期間燃放煙花爆竹是我們中華民族的傳統(tǒng)，但每年很多人因此而傷亡．是否該禁止燃放煙花爆竹一直是人們熱議的話題．請按下面的要求，用英語寫成一篇100-120字的短文，向21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)投稿．
請就此話題談?wù)勀愕目捶�，至少列出兩條理由；
提出合理建議．
注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）．
Fireworks display 燃放煙花爆竹
Whether fireworks display should be banned during the Spring Festival has been long debated．As far as I am concerned，Whether fireworks display should be banned during the Spring Festival has been long debated．As far as I am concerned，it is really necessary to ban fireworks display in the Spring Festival．There are reasons as follows：
First of all，it is very dangerous to set off fireworks．Every year，it is reported that setting off fireworks has caused many deaths and injuries．In some cases it even causes big fires，turning into tragic disasters．Secondly，fireworks will cause a lot of pollution，air and noise，for example，to the earth and our neighborhoods，especially at night．
Therefore，I think we should not set off fireworks in the Spring Festival．If we really want to create the joyful atmosphere of the traditional festival，electronic fireworks may be a good choice．Undoubtedly，they are safe to play and cause much less pollution．What's more，they can be used repeatedly，thus saving much money．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇要點(diǎn)文．在寫作時，考生應(yīng)該盡可能地減少錯誤，避免出現(xiàn)漢字、拼音、空格等低級錯誤，盡量避開自己使用起來沒有把握的單詞和句子．如果為了追求句式的變化而出現(xiàn)了一些本來可以避免的錯誤，就得不償失了．在保證準(zhǔn)確的前提下，考生才可以考慮句式的變化，應(yīng)用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)．提醒考生注意動詞的時態(tài)及語氣．
重點(diǎn)短語和句型：
ban 禁止
set off fireworks 然放煙花
create the joyful atmosphere 營造快樂的氛圍
it is really necessary to ban fireworks display in the Spring Festival．
句中it作形式主語，真正的主語是后面的動詞不定式．
it is reported that setting off fireworks has caused many deaths and injuries．
句中it作形式主語，真正的主語是后面的that從句．
If we really want to create the joyful atmosphere of the traditional festival，electronic fireworks may be a good choice．
句中if連接條件狀語從句．

解答 Whether fireworks display should be banned during the Spring Festival has been long debated．As far as I am concerned，it is really necessary to ban fireworks display in the Spring Festival．（高分句型一） There are reasons as follows：【表達(dá)看法】
     First of all，it is very dangerous to set off fireworks．Every year，it is reported that setting off fireworks has caused many deaths and injuries．（高分句型二）In some cases it even causes big fires，turning into tragic disasters．Secondly，fireworks will cause a lot of pollution，air and noise，for example，to the earth and our neighborhoods，especially at night．【說明理由】
    Therefore，I think we should not set off fireworks in the Spring Festival．If we really want to create the joyful atmosphere of the traditional festival，electronic fireworks may be a good choice．（高分句型三）Undoubtedly，they are safe to play and cause much less pollution．What's more，they can be used repeatedly，thus saving much money．【提出建議】

點(diǎn)評 書面表達(dá)題考查的是英語的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．