Question

全球變暖已經(jīng)成為全人類普遍關(guān)注的問題之一。請就以下要點發(fā)表你對此問題的見解。
　　1. 全球變暖對地球環(huán)境造成了很大影響
　　2. 引起全球變暖的原因
3. 我們需要采取的措施
要求：1. 100 詞左右   2. 可適當發(fā)揮

Answer 1

No one, regardless of race ,religion or nationality, can deny that the would we live in is becoming increasingly intolerable because of the effect of global warming . According to many experts , even greater impacts are still on the way.
There are quantities of causes for this problem . On the one hand, human-related emissions of carbon into the atmosphere is causing , and will in the future cause, significant global warming according to the theory. On the other hand, the lack of knowledge about the importance of protecting environment has a bad effect on the solving of the problem.
It is urgent that immediate and effective measures should be taken right away. First , more trees need to be planted to help improve and beautify the environment. Besides, stricter laws concerning global warming and irresponsible use of fuel resources have to be put into effect and achieve good results.

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