Question

假如你是校自行車俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人劉佳，請你根據(jù)下列提示，準(zhǔn)備一份公告。包括：
1. 加入俱樂部的好處： 強(qiáng)身健體，結(jié)交朋友等。
2. 主要活動內(nèi)容和安排：
（1） 每周一次基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練，有教師指導(dǎo)，安排在課外活動(extra-curricular activities)時(shí)間。
（2） 每月一次戶外活動， 安排在雙休日。
（3） 有機(jī)會同其他俱樂部進(jìn)行比賽。
3. 加入俱樂部的方式：本人來學(xué)生會填表或者打電話（85599551）。
4. 注意事項(xiàng)： 器材自備，活動免費(fèi)。
**提示：1.詞數(shù)100字左右，要求書寫工整，卷面整潔。
2. 不要逐字對譯，文章要層次清晰，順暢完整。
Dear schoolmates,
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Yours,
Liu Jia

Answer 1

Dear schoolmates,
Welcome to the Cycling Club．This is the ideal place for you to keep fit，make more friends and experience the excitement of discovery． We have basic training once a week during the time of extra-curricular activities, which will be instructed by professional teachers．Every month we will arrange an outdoor cycling trip at weekends．The members will have some races with other teams if possible．
If you are interested in our club, you can either come to the Students Union in person or fill out the forms or dial 85599551． By the way, you have to get the equipment ready by yourself, but all the activities can be participated for free．
Come and join us!
Yours,
Liu Jia

試題分析：這是一篇公告，介紹自行車俱樂部的好處，活動安排等，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，寫作不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)的時(shí)候注意遣詞造句，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】Welcome to the Cycling Club．This is the ideal place for you to keep fit，make more friends and experience the excitement of discovery．這句話用了不定式做定語，  We have basic training once a week during the time of extra-curricular activities, which will be instructed by professional teachers．這句話有非限制性定語從句，Every month we will arrange an outdoor cycling trip at weekends．The members will have some races with other teams if possible．這句話用了省略句，
If you are interested in our club, you can either come to the Students Union in person or fill out the forms or dial 85599551．這句話用了either…or…結(jié)構(gòu)。