Question

1．假如你是中學(xué)生李津，家住天津．你的英國(guó)筆友Jason來(lái)信談到了他的故鄉(xiāng)London，并希望了解你家鄉(xiāng)天津的情況．請(qǐng)你用英文寫一封回信．
回信必須包括以下內(nèi)容：
（1）自然情況：地理位置優(yōu)越、氣候風(fēng)景宜人等；
（2）發(fā)展成就：經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展迅速、城市高樓林立等；
（3）存在問(wèn)題：交通擁堵現(xiàn)象、空氣污染問(wèn)題等；
（4）對(duì)天津發(fā)展的看法：內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定．
注意：
（1）請(qǐng)勿提及與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)信息；
 （2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
 （3）詞數(shù)不少于100；書信格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．   
參考詞匯：高層建筑 high-rise building．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：New bridges and roads have been built，high rise buildings standing inmany parts of the city．
                    高層建筑矗立在城市的各個(gè)角落．此處用buildings+standing 獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)．
高分句型二：However，there are still some problems，such as heavy traffic in rush hours and severe air pollution，whichhave a bad influence on people's daily life．
                   however"然而"，表示轉(zhuǎn)折，過(guò)渡詞使用銜接上下文．
                   which指problems，關(guān)系代詞充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)，引導(dǎo)一個(gè)非限制定語(yǔ)從句．
較好的短語(yǔ)：more than happy，are available for，have a bad influence on，so that；

解答 Dear Jason，
        I'm more than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London．Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Tianjin．
Located on the Haihe River，Tianjin is a beautiful place for people to live in．Its economy has been developing rapidly during the past ten years．New bridges and roads have been built，①high rise buildings standing in many parts of the city．More and more schools and hospitals are available for the native people．It is developing into a modern and charming city．②However，there are still some problems，such as heavy traffic in rush hours and severe air pollution，which have a bad influence on people's daily life．In my view，Tianjin should develop healthily and scientifically，so that we could have a better hometown in future．
Yours，
Li Jin

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱式作文．寫好提綱式作文關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示，然后確定主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)．根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)加上自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)，采用不能表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)．同時(shí)，注意主次分明，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確簡(jiǎn)潔，使用一定銜接詞，最后檢查有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤．