Question

書面表達 （20分 ）

2月4日，星期天上午，你們班同學(xué)騎車到學(xué)校附近的公園組織了一次環(huán)保活動。請根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容寫一篇日記并發(fā)表你對此次活動的看法。

活動內(nèi)容一 掃除： 收集廢紙、煙蒂、塑料袋等廢棄物

活動內(nèi)容二 宣傳： 樹立標(biāo)牌、告訴游客要愛護花草樹木

活動內(nèi)容三 演講： 向游客宣傳：“白色污染”的害處以及保護環(huán)境的重要性

你的看法 ……..

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Answer 1

February 4, Sunday Fine

This morning , our class organized an enviornmental protection activity in the nearby park.

On arriving there , we divided this activity into three parts. First , we collected the rubbish, such as waste paper, cigarette ends, plastic bags and so on . Then we set up several boards to remind the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees. After that, we gave a speech to the visitors on the danger of white pollution and the importance of protecting the environment

I think it is very important for us to protect the environment .For the sake of people’s health and happiness, measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution and everyone should make a contribution to it . We benefit a lot from this activity. I’ll never forget the memorable day!

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于應(yīng)用文中的日記，審題時注意本文使用過去時，文章的要點都已經(jīng)給了出來，只需要翻譯即可，可以分開寫三組的不同活動。在個人看法的時候要明確要加強對人們環(huán)保理念的教育，提高人們的環(huán)保意識，政府在這方面要加強力度

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語such as 例如；set up 建立；take care of照顧；For the sake of為了；On arriving there , we divided this activity into three parts.這個句子on是連詞表示一。。就；I think it is very important for us to protect the environment這個句子it做形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式；For the sake of people’s health and happiness, measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution and everyone should make a contribution to it這個句子用了情態(tài)動詞與被動語態(tài)相結(jié)合；

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