Question

17．隨著老齡化問題的日趨嚴(yán)重，空巢老人越來越多，有的老人呆在家里無所事事，感到空虛寂寞．請你向"China Daily"報社專欄寫一封關(guān)于讓這些老年人歡度老年時光的建議信．
注意：1、至少提兩條以上建議；
2、開頭語與結(jié)束語已給出，不計入總次數(shù)．詞數(shù)不少于120；
3、不能使用真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
空巢老人（empty nester）
Dear editor，
Dear editor，
As the aging population is becoming larger and larger，the problem of the empty nesters is getting more and more serious．
I think they had better join in some outdoor activities，such as climbin mountains，playing Taiji．They can also take up some hobbies like gardening or playing chess．Perhaps they can keep a pet like a dog or a cat．And I think that what is the most important for them is to make some friends with the people of their age，so that they can keep each other in company and share their experiences and happiness．（高分句型一） Having friends means that they can have some one to talk to so thatthey won't feel lonely and depressed．（高分句型二）
In my opinion，these suggestions may be helpful to them．I hope all the empty nesters will have a happy old life in future．
Sincerely yours，
Wang Ming
Sincerely yours，
Wan Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
And I think that what is the most important for them is to make some friends with the people of their age，so that they can keep each other in company and share their experiences and happiness．我認(rèn)為對他們來說最重要的就是結(jié)交一些和他們同齡的朋友，那樣的話他們可以彼此為伴還可以分享彼此的人生經(jīng)歷和快樂的事．
高分句型二：
Having friends means that they can have some one to talk to so that you won't feel lonely and depressed．
結(jié)交朋友意味著他們有交流心聲的對象，那樣他們就不會感到孤獨和沮喪．
句型一 用到了多種從句①that what is the most important for them 這是一個位于that后面由what 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，what在句中充當(dāng)主語．②so that they can keep each other in company and share their experiences and happiness．這是由so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句，表明交朋友的好處
句型二 該句主語由動名詞短語充當(dāng)，而賓語則是一個由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句
（句型一和二的使用表明語法功底扎實，從句的正確使用在書面表達(dá)中會起到畫龍點睛的效果）
in my poinion 在我看來

解答 Dear editor，
   As the aging population is becoming larger and larger，the problem of the empty nesters is getting more and more serious．
    I think they had better join in some outdoor activities，such as climbin mountains，playing Taiji．They can also take up some hobbies like gardening or playing chess．Perhaps they can keep a pet like a dog or a cat．And I think that what is the most important for them is to make some friends with the people of their age，so that they can keep each other in company and share their experiences and happiness．（高分句型一） Having friends means that they can have some one to talk to so that they won't feel lonely and depressed．（高分句型二）
    In my opinion，these suggestions may be helpful to them．I hope all the empty nesters will have a happy old life in future．
 Sincerely yours，
 Wang Ming

點評 本書面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文，應(yīng)用文寫作應(yīng)注意其語言表達(dá)和形式，開頭和結(jié)尾的套話要運用恰當(dāng)，符合文體特點．在寫作時力求語言準(zhǔn)確、簡潔．