【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Last week my parents and I made three-day tour of Hong Kong. On our arrive, we headed straight for the Golden Bauhinia Square. After lunch, we went to Hong Kong Ocean Park, there we were impressed by a good many of interesting ocean creatures. After supper, we admired the fascinated night scenes of Victoria Harbor on a cruise ship. The next day, we visited Hong Kong Disneyland and had much fun participated in many exciting activities. On the three day, we went on a sightseeing tour of the street and purchased some souvenir gift. Although we were exhausted, we found worthwhile to have such a nice tour. Not only did it entertained me, but it also broadened my horizons.

【答案】1. 第一行： made后加a

2..第一行：arrive改為arrival

3.第二行：there改為where 或there 前加 and

4. 第三行：去掉of

5.第四行：fascinated改為fascinating

6. 第五行：participated改為participating

7. 第五行：three改為third

8. 第六行：gift改為gifts

9. 第六行：found 后加it

10. 第七行：entertained改為entertain

【解析】1．考查冠詞的基本用法．Mountain是可數(shù)名詞，這里是泛指，所以要加不定冠詞．故第一行： made后加a 。

　　2．考查名詞的基本用法．On our arrive意思是當(dāng)我們到達時，其中our意思是形容詞性物主代詞，后面加名詞．故arrive改為arrival

3．考查連詞的用法．there we were impressed by a good many of interesting ocean creatures.意思是我們印象深刻有許多有趣的海洋生物。　這是個完整句子，所以前面加連詞and。

　4．考查介詞．Many things意思是許多事，后面不需要介詞，故去電of。

5．考查動詞時態(tài)．After supper, we admired the fascinated night scenes of Victoria Harbor on a cruise ship.意思是晚飯后，我們欣賞了維多利亞港在游輪上的夜景。其中修飾物需要用ing形式，表示某人感到怎么樣用ed形式，故　fascinated改為fascinating。

　6．考查動詞時態(tài)．The next day, we visited Hong Kong Disneyland and had much fun participated in many exciting activities.意思是第二天，我們參觀了香港迪士尼樂園，參加了許多令人興奮的活動，其中形容物用ing形式，與上題考點一樣故participated改為participating 。

　　7考查序數(shù)詞的用法．On the three day要表達的是第三天，應(yīng)該用序數(shù)詞，故three改為third

　　8．考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，gift意思是禮物，此處禮物應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故gift改為gifts．

考查代詞的用法．Found something 意思是尋找某事，此處是指上文的trip，故用it 來代指，故found 后加it 。

10考查動詞，Not only did it entertained me, but it also broadened my horizons.意思是它不僅使我開心，而且開闊了我的視野。這是個倒裝句，助動詞did提前，所以動詞應(yīng)該用原形。故entertained改為entertain

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