Question

14．Mrs Smith heard her new neighbor would come and moved into his new house，but she hadn't seen him．One day when she came back，she saw a man wear a brown hat and dark glasses carrying a ladder on his shoulder．The man put the ladder against the window of the new house and went up to break in the window．Mrs Smith said to himself，"Thief，it is a thief．"She rang up the police immediate and soon two policemen appeared in the front of the house．When the man was told to hand in everything what he had stolen，he looked greatly surprising．It was then he understood the reason why the policemen came．He said in a smile on his face，"I can't find my key．It's my new house．"

Answer 1

分析 史密斯夫人聽(tīng)說(shuō)新鄰居要來(lái)了，但還沒(méi)看過(guò)．一天她回家時(shí)，看到一個(gè)人爬窗戶(hù)，于是打電話(huà)給警察說(shuō)有小偷．警察來(lái)要這個(gè)人交出偷的東西時(shí)，這個(gè)人笑著說(shuō)："我鑰匙找不到，這是我的新家．"

解答 Mrs Smith heard her new neighbor would come and moved into his new house，but she hadn't seen him．One day when she came back，she saw a man wear a brown hat and dark glasses carrying a ladder on his shoulder．The man put the ladder against the window of the new house and went up to break in the window．Mrs Smith said to himself，"Thief，it is a thief．"She rang up the police immediate and soon two policemen appeared in the front of the house．When the man was told to hand in everything what he had stolen，he looked greatly surprising．It was then∧he understood the reason why the policemen came．He said in a smile on his face，"I can't find my key．It's my new house．"
詳解：
1．moved改為move；動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤．句中move和come作并列謂語(yǔ)，位于情態(tài)動(dòng)詞would后，要用動(dòng)詞原形．          
2．wear改為wearing；分詞錯(cuò)誤．句中wear作man的后置定語(yǔ)，要用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞；wear與man之間構(gòu)成主謂關(guān)系，要用表示主動(dòng)的現(xiàn)在分詞．         
3．in改為into；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．break into打碎，闖入．     
4．himself改為herself；邏輯指代錯(cuò)誤．句意指代的是Mrs Smith，表示女性，要用herself來(lái)指代． 
5．immediate改為immediately；副詞錯(cuò)誤．句中immediate修飾的是謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞rang up，要用副詞形式．  
6．去掉the；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．in the front of表示內(nèi)部的前面；in front of表示外部的前面．   
7．what改為that；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句中he had stolen作everything的后置短語(yǔ)，是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句；從句缺少賓語(yǔ)，且先行詞everything是不定代詞，要用that來(lái)引導(dǎo)．
8．surprising改為surprised；形容詞錯(cuò)誤．句中surprising作系動(dòng)詞look的表語(yǔ)，且表示主語(yǔ)he的感受，要用過(guò)去分詞構(gòu)成的形容詞．      
9．加that；句型搭配錯(cuò)誤．it was…that…強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，對(duì)he understood the reason why the policemen came then中的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)then進(jìn)行強(qiáng)調(diào)．           
10．in改為with；介詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是伴隨狀態(tài)，要用with短語(yǔ)作伴隨狀語(yǔ)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．