假設你是王平，李華是你的同窗好友，請根據(jù)下列要點，用英文給李華寫一篇畢業(yè)留言。

要點：1. 簡要表述李華在你心目中的印象；

2. 用一到兩個相關(guān)的事例進行具體描述；

3. 對他（李華）表示美好的的祝愿。

 

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Yours, Wang Ping

 

Dear Li Hua,

It’s time to say goodbye. It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need.

Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. You took good care of me while I was having an injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. Without your help, I would have failed in the examination.

I still have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!

Yours,

Wang Ping

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為提綱類作文。寫作內(nèi)容貼近學生生活，且實用性較強。由于文章內(nèi)容涉及到“李華在你心中的形象”（現(xiàn)在的一般情況），用事例說明（過去事件），對他的祝愿（祝愿將來），故要注意時態(tài)的準確使用。

亮點說明：該篇范文采用三段式，條理清晰地全面表達了要點。全文用詞準確，時態(tài)使用正確。此外，作者對于定語從句,例如：It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need. 和強調(diào)句式it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital.的運用準確無誤、恰到好處，使得文章句式多變，值得稱道！

 

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