Question

讀圖并請根據你對這幅圖片的理解，結合寫作要求用英語寫一篇詞數不少于120詞的短文。
寫作要求：
1．簡要描述圖片（如：內容、寓意）；
2．幫助他人的原因、好處：
3．你自己將如何幫助他人。
注意：
可參照圖片里的文字以及文章的開頭提示
做必要的發(fā)揮想象；
2．開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數；
3．作文中不得提及有關考生的真實信息。
Whether to help others is an issue concerning everyone. Some people_______________________
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Answer 1

Whether to help others is an issue concerning everyone. Some people hold the view that helping others will cause trouble to us unexpectedly, while others think it a traditional virtue to aid others.
As is vividly shown in the picture, roses given, fragrance in hand, which means helping others is beneficial both to others and ourselves. It's a pity that people are becoming more and more indifferent to each other. We should help others because everyone needs help no matter what he does. If we lend a helping hand to others, we will be offered help when we have difficulty. What's more, we will feel happy because of our kindness. That's to say, helping others is helping us and we can take pleasure in offering help, which contributes to building a harmonious society.
Therefore, don't hesitate to help others. How can we help others? Personally, I'm supposed to be concerned about those who're in trouble. I can work as a volunteer, a donator or even as a good listener. Sometimes a few encouraging words could make a difference.

試題分析：這是一篇開放式作文，也是看圖作文，認真讀圖，可知圖畫反映了授人玫瑰手有余香的道理，寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點說明】. 文章立意準確，語言豐富，運用詞組和句型較多：lend a helping hand to 幫助…，That's to say, 也就是說，take pleasure in樂于， hesitate to猶豫， be concerned about關心，in trouble有困難， make a difference. 有影響，Some people hold the view that helping others will cause trouble to us unexpectedly, while others think it a traditional virtue to aid others.這句話用了同位語從句； As is vividly shown in the picture, roses given, fragrance in hand, which means helping others is beneficial both to others and ourselves. 這句話用了非限制性定語從句，It's a pity that people are becoming more and more indifferent to each other. 這句話用了固定句型，We should help others because everyone needs help no matter what he does. 這句話用了讓步狀語從句，還有文章還使用了What's more這樣的詞，使文章更加連貫。