Question

假如你是李華，打算明年去美國(guó)留學(xué)。一家美國(guó)網(wǎng)站專(zhuān)門(mén)為外國(guó)留學(xué)生提供住宿家庭的信息，因此你給他們發(fā)一封電子郵件，說(shuō)明你的租房要求；
1. 提供單獨(dú)的房間2. 房子的地點(diǎn)要遠(yuǎn)離市中心3. 免費(fèi)提供生活用品（洗衣機(jī)、炊具等）4. 每月房租不超出100美元
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：住宿家庭 host family

Answer 1

Dear Sir /Madam,
I am going to study in the USA next year. I learn from your website that you can provide accommodation for overseas students, so I am writing to look for a host family. Here are my requirements.
First, I’d like to have my own room, which is comfortable for me to stay in. Second, the flat should not be far away from the center of the city, where the traffic is convenient for me to go around. Third, I’d appreciate it if the host family can provide a washing machine and some cookers for free so that I can wash my clothes and cook my meals. Besides, the monthly rent should be no more than 100 pounds.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：本書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇提綱作文。提綱作文寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如provide sth. for sb.，would like to，be comfortable for，far away from, be convenient for sb. to do sth.，no more than, look forward to；where引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句；并注意了句子的銜接如：first，second，third，so，so that, Besides等等。