Question

人們常說“父愛如山”。請你根據這句話，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文，談談你和你的父親之間難忘的小事與感受。

注意： 1. 詞數：120左右。 2. 適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

When I was a little girl, I used to sit on my father’s knees, listening to his stories. I treasure my memories of those joyous days.

Once when I was helping him clean the living room, I broke a vase presented by my father’s best friend, which was very dear to my father. I felt nervous and I was afraid that my father would be angry with me. However, when he came in, he first asked if I was hurt. After I said I was OK, he smiled and said he would ask his friends to give him another one.

I’m sure my father’s love will lead me to my success and I will love him forever.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達是一篇記敘文。文章主題為“父愛如山”，主要記敘自己和父親之間難忘的小事和感受。做題時包括以下幾個方面：（1）層次結構，（2）句子的時態(tài)（3）內容要點。尤其是內容要點要把握準確到位，要點需要考生拿捏準確以及正確，這加大了寫作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達形式多樣化，適當的使用一些高級句式和高級詞匯，以提高書面表達的檔次和可讀性。而且寫作時還應注意細節(jié)上的補充以豐富文章內容，使行文連貫順暢。

【亮點說明】范文概括精當，觀點明確，不乏好的詞組和句子，如：When I was a little girl, I used to sit on my father’s knees, listening to his stories.這句話用了非謂語動詞，Once when I was helping him clean the living room, I broke a vase presented by my father’s best friend, which was very dear to my father.這句話用了非限定性定語從句。

考點：考查記敘文類書面表達